Close to my dreams yet not near
Building courage against all fear
Learning that change is only constant
The goals to achieve are very distant
Making eveyones smile dawn first
Awaiting the day for my joy outburst
Not giving up no matter what
Going to try till I hit jackpot
4 comments:
u getting on de right track...good one..let de words flow..dun restrict..
just a comment..accept it or dun..
all in all..a good effort..words selection..good...keep writing..
take care
peace
its good..but i think ur trying to restrict ur words..let them flow..
all in all a good one..
word selection is cool...
appreciable..keep writing..
peace
whats the jackpot
I think ur gonan get there before Most Ritzy.
The jackpot is urs.
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